百萬英鎊英漢對照讀后感

原創(chuàng)版：
這是一個非常有趣的場景，一個穿著饒舌歌手的人揮舞著一張重達(dá)100萬英鎊的鈔票。作者馬克吐溫寫這種有趣和愚蠢的情況，讓人們笑。如果你給一個聰明和誠實(shí)的人用一張大面值鈔票掙扎著貧窮，他能住在倫敦嗎？他會怎么做？兩個兄弟做了一個賭注，然后他們迅速購買了可以從一家銀行使用的唯一一張百萬張鈔票，并將其發(fā)送給他們選擇的亨利。然而，鈔票的價格很高，以致沒有人有足夠的改變來償還，人們認(rèn)為亨利只是一個奇怪的百萬富翁，并且自由地向他出售貨物。白天，亨利認(rèn)為他可能在做白日夢，但是到了晚上，他很難入睡，因?yàn)樗滥菑埣埐皇撬摹Ｈ欢?，他因錢而出名，然后他可以與最光榮的人一起參加晚宴。在聚會中，亨利遇到了他的女孩波西亞。她終于成了他的妻子。顯然，他意識到她是兄弟的女兒之一。亨利終于贏得了他的賬單20萬。這個著名的戲劇性的法案在亨利和波西亞婚禮當(dāng)天在家中最神圣的地方被吊死。

這個故事中最有趣和最有趣的部分是描述那些在看到賬單之前鄙視他的人，以及在了解賬單后他們看起來似乎是什么。四年級時，這些部分放在我的中文書中。這就是我非常喜歡這個故事的原因之一。

當(dāng)我讀到馬克吐溫的文章時，我記得“尷尬”一詞。馬克吐溫激勵人們，發(fā)生了一些事情。他的故事中的人總是“尷尬”。他們可能會被金錢和名望所吸引，愚蠢而無知。大部分你必須嘲笑那些栩栩如生的人！



原創(chuàng)版：
It's a very funny scene that a person who was dressed in raps waved one banknote which worthed one million pound. The author Mark Twain write about this kind of funny and stupid circumstances which makes people laugh. If you give a clever and honest person who had struggling in poverty with a large denomination bank note, will he able to live in London? How will he do? Two brothers made a bet, then they quickly bought the only million bank note can used from a bank and sent it to Henry, the person they chose. However the price of the bank note was to high that nobody have enough change to pay back, people considered Henry is just a strange millionaire and sell goods to him freely. During the day, Henry thought he may be in a daydream, but at night, he can hardly fall asleep because he knew the note wasn't his. However, he became famous by his money, then he can take part in the dinner party with the most honorable people. In the party, Henry met his girl Pocia. She became his wife at last. Dramatically, he realized that she is one of the brothers' daughter. Henry finally earned 200 thousand by his bill. This famous, dramatically bill were hanged on the most holy place at home on the wedding day for Henry and Pocia.

The most funny and amusing part of the story is the description of people those who despised him before seeing the bill and what they seemed after knowing about the bill. These parts were put in my Chinese Book when I was in grade four. That is one of the reasons why I love the story so much.

When I read about Mark Twain's articles, I remember a word "embarrassed". Mark Twain stire people and some thing happened. People in his stories are always " embarrassed". They may be attracted by money and fame, stupid and ignorant. Most of the you must laugh at those lifelike people!


老師修改版：
It was a very hilarious scene that a person dressed in rags waved one banknote of one million pound. The author Mark Twain wrote about this kind of funny and witty circumstances which make people laugh. If you give a clever and honest person who had strugged in poverty with a large bank note, will he be able to survive in London? How will he do it while he could not explain this bill is his? Henry Adams found himself poor and penniless in London after boating accident swept him overboard. Pitying him, two brothers give him an envelope, and it turns out inside was a million pound bank note. They made a bet. Brother B believed that the possession of this banknote, or symbol of wealth, would allow him to survive for a month. In the envelope, the brothers made clear that a bet was made on Henry, and if he helped them complete the bet, he would win a job. However, brother A believed the bank note will be useless because he will not be able to exchange the note for cash. For example, he realized that he would nof be able to easily exchange it without being questioned how he received the note, leading to a potential arrest due to theft. In fact, the price of the bank note was too high that nobody had enough change to pay it back. When he brings the million pound bank note to the restaurant, the manager feels sorry for him because he has no change and gives him the meal for free. Finally, in an act of desperation, he decided to see if he can use the note to exchange his rags for a cheap suit. When he pulls out the million pound note to pay, the store manager gives him the entire wardrobe on credit. People considered Henry just a strange millionaire and sold goods to him freely. During the day, Henry thought he might be in a daydream. At night, he could hardly fall asleep because he knew the note wasn't his. Ultimately, he becomes a celebrity in London as the "vest pocket million-pounder". At the party, Henry met a girl named Pocia. At the end of the story, she became his wife at last. Dramatically, he also realized that she is one of the brothers' daughter. Finally, Henry earned 200 thousand through his investments. This famous, dramatical bill were hung on the most holy place at home on the Henry and Pocia's wedding day.

The most funny and amusing part of the story is the description of people who looked down him before seeing the bill and how they behave after knowing about the bill. It seems as though people's personality and behavior around him changed simply because of the presence of wealth, which is what Brother B bet. These parts were included in my Chinese text when I was in fourth grade. That is one of the reasons why I love the story so much.

When I read about Mark Twain's stories, I always think about a word "embarrassed". Mark Twain critiques people and some clever and eccentric thing happened. People in his stories are always " embarrassed". They may be attracted by money and fame, but at the end of the day, stupid and igno.rant. For example, the owner of the restaurant and stores are embarrassed because they were rude to Henry before seeing the banknote. You must laugh at those lifelike people!




老師評語：
Today Chassie and I discussed her book analysis on Mark Twain's short story, One Million Pound Bank Note. While her essay was nearly free of grammatical errors, we mainly worked on including more details about the actual story, including the character progression, the character's interactions with other characters in the book, and the narrative arc. Don't be afraid to include as many details as possible, as it will definitely engage your audience and keep them in the loop about the story progression. We also worked on the transitions between different sentences to improve the fluidity of the entire essay and show the movement of Mark Twain's story. Great job!





這次作文閨女準(zhǔn)備不充分，老師改動添加的內(nèi)容比較多，特分開存放，仔細(xì)體會學(xué)習(xí)下。


老師修改版：
一個人是一個非常熱鬧的場景 身著碎布揮舞著一百萬英鎊的一張鈔票。作者馬克吐溫寫過這種有趣而機(jī)智的情節(jié)，讓人們笑起來。如果你給一個聰明和誠實(shí)的人用一張大鈔票在貧困中掙扎，他能在倫敦生存嗎？他怎么會這樣做，而他無法解釋這個法案是他的？亨利亞當(dāng)斯在劃船事故席卷了他的船后，發(fā)現(xiàn)自己身無分文，身無分文。憐憫他，兩個兄弟給了他一個信封，結(jié)果里面是一百萬英鎊的鈔票。他們下注了。B弟兄認(rèn)為，擁有這張鈔票或財富的象征將使他能夠存活一個月。在信封中，兄弟倆明確表示對亨利打賭，如果他幫助他們完成賭注，他會贏得一份工作。然而，兄弟A相信鈔票是無用的，因?yàn)樗荒軐⑩n票換成現(xiàn)金。例如，他意識到他不會輕易地交換它，而不會質(zhì)疑他是如何收到鈔票的，因此可能因盜竊而被捕。事實(shí)上，紙幣的價格太高，沒有人有足夠的改變來支付。當(dāng)他將百萬英鎊的鈔票帶到餐廳時，經(jīng)理為他感到難過，因?yàn)樗麤]有任何變化，并免費(fèi)給他吃飯。最后，在一次絕望的行為中，他決定看看他是否可以用這張鈔票換一件便宜套裝。當(dāng)他掏出百萬英鎊的鈔票付款時，商店經(jīng)理給了他整個衣柜的信貸。人們認(rèn)為亨利只是一個奇怪的百萬富翁，并且自由地向他出售了貨物。白天，亨利認(rèn)為他可能在做白日夢。到了晚上，他幾乎睡不著，因?yàn)樗滥菑埣埐皇撬?。最終，他成為倫敦的名人，被譽(yù)為“背心口袋百萬磅”。在聚會上，亨利遇到了一個名叫波西亞的女孩。在故事結(jié)尾，她終于成了他的妻子。顯然，他也意識到她是兄弟的女兒之一。最后，亨利通過投資獲得了20萬美元。在Henry和Pocia的婚禮當(dāng)天，這部著名的戲劇性賬單被掛在家中最神圣的地方。顯然，他也意識到她是兄弟的女兒之一。最后，亨利通過投資獲得了20萬美元。在Henry和Pocia的婚禮當(dāng)天，這部著名的戲劇性賬單被掛在家中最神圣的地方。顯然，他也意識到她是兄弟的女兒之一。最后，亨利通過投資獲得了20萬美元。在Henry和Pocia的婚禮當(dāng)天，這部著名的戲劇性賬單被掛在家中最神圣的地方。

這個故事中最有趣也最有趣的部分是描述在看到賬單之前看不起他的人，以及在了解賬單后他們的表現(xiàn)?？雌饋砗孟袼車娜说膫€性和行為僅僅因?yàn)樨敻坏拇嬖诙淖兞?，這是B弟兄下注的。當(dāng)我在四年級時，這些部分被包含在我的中文文本中。這就是我非常喜歡這個故事的原因之一。

當(dāng)我讀到馬克吐溫的故事時，我總是想到一句話“尷尬”。馬克吐溫批評人們和一些聰明而古怪的事情發(fā)生了。他的故事中的人總是“尷尬”。他們可能會被金錢和名氣所吸引，但在一天結(jié)束時，這是愚蠢而無知的。例如，餐館和商店的老板很尷尬，因?yàn)樵诳吹解n票之前他們對亨利粗魯。你必須嘲笑那些栩栩如生的人！




老師評語：
今天，Chassie和我討論了她對馬克吐溫短篇小說“一百萬英鎊鈔票”的分析。雖然她的散文幾乎沒有語法錯誤，但我們主要致力于提供更多關(guān)于實(shí)際故事的細(xì)節(jié)，包括角色進(jìn)展，角色與書中其他角色的互動以及敘述性弧線。不要害怕包含盡可能多的細(xì)節(jié)，因?yàn)樗隙〞愕挠^眾，并將它們放在關(guān)于故事進(jìn)展的循環(huán)中。我們還研究了不同句子之間的轉(zhuǎn)換，以改善整篇文章的流暢性，并展示馬克吐溫故事的運(yùn)動。做得好！



這次作文準(zhǔn)備不充分，老師改動添加的內(nèi)容比較多，特分開存放，仔細(xì)體會學(xué)習(xí)下。